Today on the bike path

by john carlucci   Aug 6, 2006


Pumping pedals to the beat of my heart
Up, down, up and down
Under the bridge where the Morning Doves speak
Their coos clear and pure like how God must sound
I have been here before but never here
This beautiful, treacherous silence
When there is nothing but the wind, the heart, and the call of the birds

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Lovely...

  • 17 years ago

    by Lanibugz

    Your poem has absolutaly no meaning although you explain a feeling but thats all there is no storyline soz to be harsh but someone should tell u and what experience are u explaining not one that myself can fell only the way you ride a bike good luck with ur next poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Beautiful its good to see a different approach in poems i love
    Take care
    HS

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Woo! man, i'm a big fan of this. this is exactly the kind of poetry that draws me in and influences my own poems. "clear and pure like how God must sound..." not only does that have some pretty cool assonance, i love the idea!

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short and not my usual style. But you did a wonderful job in bring tranquility to your words.

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