I Love You Luke

by Just Lucy   Aug 7, 2006


Luke you were incredible
at everything you did
you set your mind on the prize
you followed through your goals

your dreams and aspirations
determination and ambition
made you see anything through
if thats what you wanted to do

your bike was always first
even i took second to that
it was your token item
you loved it more than me

its now been two years since i met you
2 years since our first date
we were together for a year and 11 months,
2 weeks, 4 days, 10 hours and 27 minutes
but hey...whose counting right?

just seeing you in that ambulance
sheet over your face
i was screaming out for you
my heart began to race

its been one week since your death
and we still haven't broken up
Luke i just can't say it
you and me, we can't be over

life's greatest thing is love
and the one i love is gone
as far as I'm concerned
I now have nothing left

your funeral was the hardest
the realization that hit
just knowing theres no going back
everything we had is gone

my favorite memory of us
is when we had to babysit
we watched the Nutcracker twice
jasmine, she just loved it!

Luke your in my prayers
every single night
and to you i will make one promise
i will never touch another motorbike!

(C) Lucy Green

i wrote this poem a while ago so yeah i have only just brought out the courage to post it, thanks for reading, your comments would be most appreciated :)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aw, you poor porr thing.. We're all here for you okay hunny? This flowed well, used great descriptions that helped us understand everything that happened, and the emotion was oozing from every line.. Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    So...did this happen a long time ago or what?
    Thats terribly sad and im sorry you had to go through such a thing!!!
    But now onto the poetry part...

    "we were together for a year and 11 months,
    2 weeks, 4 days, 10 hours and 27 minutes
    but hey...whose counting right?"
    I really liked that, it was clever haha.
    I enjoyed this poem because you could really feel he emotion you put into it.
    great job, and I enjoyed the last stanza because of its flow. good job!
    and once again, I'm so sorry for your loss

  • 17 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    I Also Liked The Part That Kristen Mentioned... I Can Almost Feel Your Pain Because You Explained Everything So Clearly..

    Keep Up The Good Work..5/5

    -Darrin..

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very sad poem I love the deep message that love has no boundries I am sorry for your loss

  • 17 years ago

    by Oscar

    Aww this was real sad. i'm sorry for your loss. you must be real strong to write a poem about it. it was really good too.