by dark blue eyes          Aug 7, 2006
    
        category :
            Sadness, depression /
            other
            
    
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            There she is, just lying on her bed | 
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            So sad but Gorgeous .. | 
| I love this i feel the same way | 
| Certainly not bad at all, but i gotta give it a 4 cuz of some minor mistakes ("noone" is two words, and after "they're all big stars" there should be an "and" instead of but) | 
by Naerwen
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            Many can appreciate and associate with this piece... it rings true within me from when I was younger. There is a honesty that shines through, perhaps because of the simple structure and wording. It is a very effect and saddening write, I enjoyed reading and reacting to it. It stirs memories aswell as pluck heartstrings... stay strong my dear, the saddeness will fade. | 
by linderrrxo
| I really liked this poem good jog you are a very good writer and keep uo love always linda 5/5 |