Wings To Fly

by dark blue eyes   Aug 7, 2006


There she is, just lying on her bed
Broken up inside, wishing she was dead

She tries so hard, but nothing's going right
Too lost to move, too tired to fight

Music blaring and eyes full of tears
No one knows and no one cares

Parents yelling through the locked door
She screams back, she can't take it anymore

She looks up at all the posters on the wall
They're all big stars, and she feels so small

Her heart's full of dreams that will never come true
Her world's shattered, she'll never get through

She doesn't want to hurt, she doesn't want to cry
If only life would give her wings to fly

far away...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    So sad but Gorgeous ..
    She looks up at all the posters on the wall
    They're all big stars, and she feels so small
    I liked those the most...keep it up5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by falln angel with broken wings

    I love this i feel the same way

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Certainly not bad at all, but i gotta give it a 4 cuz of some minor mistakes ("noone" is two words, and after "they're all big stars" there should be an "and" instead of but)

  • 16 years ago

    by Naerwen

    Many can appreciate and associate with this piece... it rings true within me from when I was younger. There is a honesty that shines through, perhaps because of the simple structure and wording. It is a very effect and saddening write, I enjoyed reading and reacting to it. It stirs memories aswell as pluck heartstrings... stay strong my dear, the saddeness will fade.

    Best wishes.

  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    I really liked this poem good jog you are a very good writer and keep uo love always linda 5/5

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