Smoke and mistakes

by gabrielle.Xx   Aug 8, 2006


See this smoke around me,
in it hides all your mistakes,
waiting for the perfect time,
to make their escape,
they hide in each particle,
floating all around,
take this stupid smoke,
and do not make a sound,
for if you do the heavens above
will make karma your worst enemy
at the very first chance it gets
it will take you away from me,
i know youve made your amount of mistakes,
but i dont want you to leave,
heavens above know i feel for you,
the way you feel for me,
so take this chance because it may be your last
and clear that smoke and fog
make your mistakes disapear
and make someone the gods can be proud of!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Barbara

    I really like this poem. I'm not sure what I liike about it, it's just a feeling of not being able to get a feeling on paper, and then having someone do it for you. Really like this one!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Barbara

    I really like this poem. I'm not sure what I liike about it, it's just a feeling of not being able to get a feeling on paper, and then having someone do it for you. Really like this one!! 5/5