Promise, and Vows

by BeautifulxMess   Aug 8, 2006


I've been wanting to know,
will the love you give me
always show?Will you stay
by my side, will you correct
me when I'm wrong, and you're
right?

Well tell me now, and make
a promise. Tell me if you'll
be here always, or just until
the end of the day.

~Promise that no matter where
life takes us, you'll always be
around. Promise you'll be the
sun, and lift me of the ground.
Promise you'll love me until the
end, even if we don't last forever,
we'll still be best friends.
Promise me that if the sun don't
shine one day, you'll bright my
way.Promise that if i happen to
die, come to my grave every day,
and please don't cry. Promise if
my life comes crashing down,
you'll help me come back around.
Promise that you'll listen to my
vow, and don't keep asking how.

My vow you:::

*I'll love you even after the world
comes to an end. If I'm angry
mad or sad, I'll still be your friend.
If i have a bad day, I'll come to u
to help me with a smile on my face.
I promise that no matter who or
what comes between our hearts,
I'll come for you, no matter how far
we are apart.*

So I'll listen to your vow, and tell
me it now. Tell me if you love me,
or if I'm too blind to see. If you
don't want me, i need to know why.
It won't help, cause I'll still cry. I hope you don't break my heart, i
know you won't I'm just saying for this start. I know we won't last forever, but my feeling for you and
love i have shared, theres nothing
in this whole world better!

*Please tell me what you think

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Very emotional feelings can be felt in this one. It is full of love and caring. Wonderful poem that is heartfelt. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    I love it!!!!!! great poem, i would only have made one change - i would have submitted the vow in the poem as a comletely different poem, but thats just me! good work b.t.w! 5/5:)