FiNAL G00DBYE

by BitsAndPieces   Aug 10, 2006


She's the love of his life
She's his 'dream come true'
She's everything he wants her to be
She's the one he says to I love you

Now he feels as if
with her , he's dying
And there's nothing or nobody
to stop him from crying

He feels as if his life
would end right now and here
He can't imagine a life
without her being near

There's nothing to comfort him
He's just in awful pain
Although the sun is shining
To him - there's only rain

She told him to move on
She said he'd find someone new
He believed he would never get over her
That's the only thing he knew

He wouldn't love another girl
He couldn't live without his one true love
He wouldn't live much longer than her
She would always be the one he's thinking of

Then the feared day was near
His eyes all wet and red
Her death was so awfully close
He realized when he sat on her bed

She could hardly open her eyes
She whispered "You'll always be mine"
Crying his eyes our he said
" Ill love you 'til the end of time!"

Then she closed her eyes for ever
Never to return again
He shouted her name and kept on crying
When he realized she died - he just ran

He didn't know where to
He just had to get away
He only knew one thing ;
Without her - alive he couldn't stay ..

(i was inspired by a song)

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  • 17 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    It was sad but luv3d it

  • 17 years ago

    by Char

    Wow that is one of the best things i have ever read!
    Well done you are really talented! x

  • I love it!! Absolutely love it. Actually, I love all your poems =] They are written so good. This is such a heartbreaking poem and I love it all. Anyways, I'll shut up now and give you 5/5
    Always Love,
    Rayne x3

    Peace

  • 17 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    That was so sad!! But it was really beautifully written, i loved it! The rhyming worked very well as well.Great work!
    "...He didn't know where to
    He just had to get away
    He only knew one thing ;
    Without her - alive he couldn't stay .."
    ^^This was my favourite stanza, it was such a heartbreaking ending! But i really liked it!Keep writing...

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS