Brand New Feeling

by Bradley Peter   Aug 10, 2006


When i awoke this morning
the world seemed a happier place
the air was much more fresh
as the sun-rays warmed my face

i knew why life was better
because I'd met someone new
someone all so special
who i think feels the same way too

they're absolutely perfect
in each and every single way
every moment spent apart
feels as if it's been a day

this feeling that i have
I've never ever felt before
they make my heart so happy
so there's no one i want more

i can feel it in every nerve
from finger tips to deep inside
i know it's definitely love
that i certainly cannot hide

now all i have to do
is tell my parents exactly why
this person I'm in love with
is actually a guy

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kelc

    Wow this is really really good. all of your writings are extremely powerful. is this a true expierience? if you din't mind me asking!

    you are a wonderful person. thank you for commenting mine

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    U C I no u sed u didn't lyk dis poem dat muchbut I thought it was well written and the flow was perfect because the hwole way through you're getting into it purely because it has a natural rhythm which makes the last line such an unexpected twist, also I don't know why but I also found it funny When I read da last line!
    Ur ryt ppl may actually think ur gay but I no da truth at least, and u no da truth and I'm glad ur not 4 obv. reasons but also turnin ur b/f gay aint rly cool!! LOL
    Lots and Lots of Love
    Bethan xxxxxxxxxxx

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