The story

by nadosh passion   Aug 11, 2006


When the story came to an end
All the love was gone by the wind
As he left me & took the stairs
I thought that he would turn & stare
But he just left me standing there
Looking at images of empty space
Filling my life with despair
& hoping for love to come again
Replacing the hurt that was made
& proving that love is always there
Waiting for people to catch & care

But I will move along with my life
Even if my life is worthless without him by my side

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  • 17 years ago

    by nadosh passion

    Thanks for what u wrote....but u r talking about the rythm that i don't have, don't u think that in thoughts its not about the rythm its about the emotions u r trying to express so if u concentrate on the rythm u won't be able to express ur emotions...believe me coz i've been writing thoughts for 6 years now....& i'm english is my foreign language so give me a break....lool...& thats why i'm better in arabic

  • 17 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    It was pretty good., but your rythm and flow were off.

    I loved how you express yourself...strong emotions..and most can relate.

    good write 4/5

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