by Rachel Aug 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Here is a story about a man |
by WordsHurt
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The start was great and i liked how you made it into a diary in the middle...the ending wants me to keep on reading..very nice piece of work! |
by mimzy
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Wow, nice! |
by Natalie
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Oooh. wow. This was awesome! Loved it how it started out like a story at the start and then into diary entries. Excellent job! |
by Dionne Jones
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Great poem |
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Very good! i liked it! :) i think you should keep going!!! |