Unprepared

Definately great...it seems bad if u just look at it...but it has that feelin...that not only is it a great poem...but u feel like a part of the person feelin the emotions....excellent job whether u kno it or not!! haha :-D

That doesn't suck I got drawn into it within the first few lines

Awwh, that was so sadd sweetie.. Wow, that also made me feel a little sick.. Great job.. The flow worked well, the descriptions were good, and the emotion was clear.. Nicely done! 5/5

I liked it. Excelent poem. Very sad and deep. I can relate to it in a way. Well done. Keep up the good work. 5/5

U spelled tear wrong lol but i dont think suicide is sa sin its a blessing to some