Aw wow Jessy! I've always wanted to do one of these, but never have! You did a really good job on it and chose the right wording for each line! Beautiful, hun, simply, b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l 5/5

Natalie``

That was really good and sweet..i love poems that are different they are hard for me to write but I love reading them lol..this was expressed beautifully..great job 5/5

This Was A Very Poetic Write.. And Like Brianna Mentioned.. Not At All Forced.. It Really Flowed.. 5/5

-Darrin..

Beautiful, especially with a calm title chosen and words that flow with each line.

Very nicely written... Very strong and it's amazing how you used the format so well. Great job. Wonderful write.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This is the first pleiades I have read ..you did an excellent job

Awh that is reakky sweet Jessy. I liked it. I think this type of a poem is really intresting. Very nicely Done.

Oh wow. Beautiful write! I've never read one like this before but it sounds wonderfully well thought out, and it flowed really well. I think I will try the style sometimes. Keep it up! 5/5

I never new a kind of poem like this a one stanza and still complete the form was great and the flow of lines
theres no words can discribe how great it is yeah very good poem

Hey, thanks for your comments on my poem, i like this, very imaginative. being a non poet it takes me a while to settle into it so i read it twice.lol
Very good
Take care
Pete

Beautiful poem. Creative style

Another great poem, I really like the imagination in your all poems, you are a great poet. keep it up
another 5/5

Unlike you, my rhyming always seemed force. Your flow was excellent and your style was unbelievable. 5/5

Wow thats a neat type of poem!! your really good i liked it!! =)

Very nicely done, excellent job Jessy!!!

Love it!!! 5/5

Nice poem

Nicely flowing... and very creative!