Don't Let Me...

This is really great. I thought you painted a beautiful picture of a truly fragile man wanting a love but not wanting to take that chance in case of getting hurt. Great job! 5/5
~Jules

Don't let me stumble
Onto the thorns of your rose,
Where the silky petals
Stroke so gently upon my skin.

^ Beautiful. I'm a huge fan of romantic poetry; using nature to relate feelings of love and attraction. Great poem.

I love this poem... the pleading is so heartfelt. I can definately relate, as well. Deep work. :)

Thanks for the comments .... I took up your suggestion on Russian Roulette and gave you full kudos.

have a wonderful day,

Car

Your poetry always manages to blow me away. I want to cry now. *watery smile* Beautiful!

One of my favorites__Simon Hayes:A model writer who writes the contents of his heart...

I really like your works and i appreciate your comment on my poem *i knew it's not a fairytale...

hope u'll read *my soul will find yours and *the witch..

i really like the lines "dont let me love you
if this love is one-sided"... really touched me

hope to read new poems from you.