Take my heart

by Jordan Smith   Aug 16, 2006


Take my heart, tear it in two, no need to ask me for help, you know what to do.

Take my heart and never give it back, take it so that love and care will always be something I lack

Make me cry the way you do, tell me you love me, when you know it's untrue.

Dig a hole so deep and wide, bury my heart locked with hate inside. Stomp on it it till it's completely flat, make sure my heart will never be placed back.

Hide the pieces, no need for them anymore, isn't this game the one you love and adore?

You're doing a good job, my heart is almost through, make sure you make it disappear before you start over with someone new.

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  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I really enjoyed this. You paint an interesting picture and again your words hold so much tense emotion. The only thing I would suggest is to tweak the 4th and final stanzas so that they follow the 2 line pattern you started as it looks a little disjointed and rocks the flow somewhat.