Mistake

by Jordan Smith   Dec 8, 2006


The lies you hold, the tears I shed, day by day, I wish to hold, one second of a day I don't wish myself dead.

The memories grew, now I watch them fade, if only you could see, how my heart is drifting away.

Love was placed in my soul, and now I see it's misplaced, my life you stole, and now I'm starting to erase.

Three little words became our everyday theme, they meant what I thought was our future, I'm starting to see, that wasn't reality, but a never ending dream.

Lost where you said you'd never leave me, everything so blurry, the sight of you I no longer can see, you made me a poser of who I wanted to be.

My cry grew louder, you made my everything harder, you took my life and ate it away with your lies, left me here, to pick myself up from the days I wanted to die.

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  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Interesting format. I thought at first you needed to break it up somewhat but as the poem flows it works really well. The emotive element is a characteristic I like about your work and is strong and consistent in this piece. Keep it up.
    p.s I got on my space

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I really have never read any pattern like this and its really nice, good selection of words.

    all the best and take care