Very well written

This is a very heartfelt poem, and it brought tears to my eyes... your a terrific poet and i love your work!!!

Awh i have goosebumps.
Definitly was wonderful
and deserve's nothing but 5'z!!

That was beautiful great job ~bee~

Wow kwl it rhymes lol gd writing keep it up look @ sum of mine plz xx

I know how that is girl I lost my mom to crack

Thats really good it brought a tear to my eye

Another poem that gave me goosebumps and tears to my eyes. well done.......

chelsea

Very sad, but true for many. Though my dad isn't on crack, he still left us for someone else. I feel like a little seven year old girl inside, everytime I think about my dad. This poem made me want to cry, it's sad that a seven year old has to go through something that I went through in my twenties (but I guess it all hurts the same no matter how old you are).
This is another great poem!!!

My dad has never come to like any thing that i've ever done:( so i no that feeling all to well:(....but i like the point of view you put on this poem great job...i really don't no what to say
thank you for helping me:)
i no it will take time maybe forever but now i kinda have a start:)
auna

I love it. it was amazingly written, and the perspective u put on it was so good. i almost cried.

*tear rolls down his cheek* That was really nice... 5/5

I like this very much. I think it's great how you wrote from the child's perspective.

Deana,

This had really touched my heart A LOT!

This made me think of my cousin and how his birthday is just tomorrow and so is my boyfriends birthday, and they're both locked up on their birthday and I miss my cousin and my bf very much. But my bf is just in JDC til Wednesday so I'll be able to see him on Sat.

Great poem. 5/5

Thats good 5/5

great point of view

5/5.. great poem. my dad is an alcoholic and use to use drugs

Deana - wow - that was amazing. Made my heart skip a beat when I read it. Very sad and so perfectly written - from the eyes of an innocent, trusting, naively beautiful child. :(

I can see why this is your favourite poem

Hope your friend you wrote it for read it and realised what he was doing.

Mo
xx