The shortness is so good, and I can totally agree with what you are saying.

"Heart's"
[Hearts] since you're talking about more than one. I really liked this, short and simple.

Awh, that was so sad hunny.. Great job though, all the syllable counts worked and the words you used were good.. Nicely done! 5/5

This is true.. they will break one day

Wowee-- hun! This was great. For such a short little poem, you've put so much emotions into it. A very lovely job! Keep it up!! Ily. 5/5

Natalie``

Very profound

Very true poem. Good job

So true and so succint, well done onsticking to the format of this difficult structure