Did you....

by The Lonely Rose   Aug 19, 2006


As you watch me break down....
Fall and crash in the depths of hell...
Reaching out a hand to catch me....
But just fall straight on my back...
Lying there lifeless.....
What are the thoughts going Through your mind...
Did you care...
Were you too scared to catch me...
Did i deserve it..
Is there something that i did wrong...
As i got up the devil stand there Before me..
Was he waiting for me..
Did you call him to take me away...
He was standing there smiling to My undoing...
He put a hand on in the middle on my back..
And chanted something i couldn't understand..
But i was so weak....
I started to fade...
My soul was coming out...
Did you sell my soul to him..
Then i started to glow..
The purest of white....
He just chanted louder...
In my mind i was screaming help But wondering...
Did you do this..
Now my soul is out...
My body destroyed...
Now I'm a piece of property owned By the devil.....but i have only one question to ask you..
Did you do all this..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    Amazing Gabby! it was very very nicely done! WoW! i like it soo much! Gabby your a great poet your my fav! *gives you 10 stars* =P thanks for comment!
    love ya bunches
    ~Amber Dawn~

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Did you sell my soul to him..

    ^^I really liked those lines. I dunno why. They just stood out alot to me.

    The poem was nicely done. I liked it alot. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Now I'm a piece of property owned By the devil.....but i have
    Wow your words have so much power and thought behind them! That was a poem orgasim all on its own :D

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    I like it did it

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