Come Back

by Miss Megan   Aug 19, 2006


Silence,
black and white.
Slow breeze,
pitch black night.
No stars,
no bright moon.
Long time,
Come back soon.

[i dont really like this one]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I liked this a lot. I guess it was the shortness. haha. idk...but this was good...straight and to the point i guess. I don't know what to say. i just liked it lol. btw, this is poetess...
    take care!!

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I thought this was very interesting...I think this is about as short as you can make a poem and still call it a poem lol, well besides a heiku (sp?) I guess. I really liked it though...very unique...very short but you got your point across. I loved it.
    5.5
    Breanna