Comments : Precious Gift

  • 14 years ago

    by Anthony

    Very nice poem girly! I like it. But i don't understand the ending. WHAT WAS THE GIFT?!!?!?! My first thought was that the girl is pregnant too. But it was a very good poem. Nice Write.


  • 14 years ago

    by jessel jane

    Wow... simply wonderful.uniquely wonderful

  • 14 years ago

    by tamara

    I apsolutely love the structure of this poem..
    so different.. so unique.
    you have great talent.. keep up the good work my friend.. xo

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  • 14 years ago

    by Tormented

    I love this poem! i love the sturcture of this poem!very uniquely amazing! I love it! 5/5

    Keep Smiling
    Keep Writing


  • 14 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...breathtaking...that was great.

  • 14 years ago

    by Rosie

    Awwww... i don't know if this really happend to u but if so i'm very sorry. i love a boy but he's only a couple months older than me and i love him and he love a nother gurl. anyways i love u'r poem i can feel the love. And how u decribed it very, very good!!! i give u a 5/5 very well keep ^ the good work!!!

    sign, Rosie
    good luck

  • 14 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow.. this is one of the very few poems that actually get my heart pumping. I was.. am.. speechless. That is so very heart wrenching I can barely stand to even think about it.. not the the poem, the situation i nthe poem. Wow. I sincerely hope thats not true. But I love how you wrote it. Like a story from both point of views. That's pure genius. Wow... Kudos.

  • 14 years ago

    by capnoats

    I like this poem, I really love how you wrote it. :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by moonlil

    That's a really great poem! I loved it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Pretty amazing...really shows both sides and in a very unique way...keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by David

    Absolutely GORGEOUSLY written! rich in emotion and... just GREAT! 5/5

    well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This had me on the edge of my seat all the way until the end. It's so sad, he loved her but he couldn't be with her. Awwww... I kind of feel sorry for the bride too a little bit (but just a little). I really enjoyed this piece.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ariana

    I really enjoyed this for different reasons. I liked how you have two separate characters speaking. This is the first piece I've read ever on this site that is able to pull this off which is impressive. I also liked the scenario and how you create characters with depth despite only having a short space to work with. It doesn't sound cliched at all and all the lines fit in perfectly. I was also impressed with how much detail you put in despite only having two lines for each stanza. The only part I did not understand was which girl was pregnant. Excellent stuff anyways, I liked it.


  • 11 years ago

    by Nanita

    That was deep.. very deep. It felt very realistic the way it is written.. Really great peice of writing (:

  • 10 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    That was dope good poem atomic I remember you you stop writing poetry for a little then came back good to see real writing again :)