The way the candle light your face

by -The-Undying-   Aug 20, 2006


Was I dreaming?
I asked my self as I shook my head.
What was that terrible screaming?
I disregarded it and rolled back into bed.

The next day something was not right.
For there was something missing,
something that kept me up the whole night.
I imagined two lovers kissing,
fallowed by an enticing bite.

As I slept an angel crept into my nightmare.
She was beautifull and talked with the sweetest voice.
I was speechless as she sucked away all of my despair.
She had told me the truth and left me with a choice.

A stranger had showed up at my door the next day.
I was captivated by her grace.
So I let my guard down as my emotions were put on display.
I hugged her with a warm embrace.
I know what I want, and I think that you may.
For if you be with me she said, all your sins I will erase.
She promised she would not betray.
We talked over a romantic dinner, I still remember how the candle lights her face.
The next day she went away,
Gone forever without a trace.

The next year there was a baby at my door.
Was this mine, I gasped as I picked him up off the floor.
There was a note attached "remember how you wanted more".
I have given you what you want, I will never betray as I said before.

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  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Great style and it reminds me about my love

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I thought this was more of a story than a poem, really...I also thought you were trying to rhyme too much...again =P The flow was...not exactly very well done. It could still be worked on a little more. =) xoxo 5/5

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written. very touching. great job xx

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow.. I loved this... It's simply amazing. It's very unlike the rest of the love poems you hear about...God it's amazing. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5