The pain i feel

by .+.unpretty_loser.+.   Aug 22, 2006


The pain i feel is just nightmare
because i know that your not really there.

the pain i feel is just a bad dream,
but why do i wanna scream?

the pain i feel is not really real,
but how does it feel so real?

the pain i feel is just an illusion,
mixed with my confusion

i don't know....... it was just a random poem that i just made up then. sorry if it's shit

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  • 17 years ago

    by ImNoTpErFEct

    Its so not sh*te its beautiful i love it i can relate to it totaly cos ppl tell me my pain aint real but i know its real

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    It's not. shit. i like it. maybe if u added a bit more to it. it'll be more emotional. i think it's good.
    love willow xxoo