Alone

I feel so alone. The clouds close and the sun goes away, preparing for another sad day. A sad little girl sits on the floor, dressed in all black. Hiding from the world. Dont know where to turn , all she wanted was a friend all her own. But instead they made fun of her look and her clothes, she thought to herself "how would they feel if the tables were turned?" one by one she thought of them all. who she would spare and who she would make fall. She plotted this fate day after day until that fateful day came. She walks in the school dressed in all black, spikes and chains hang from her wrists and clothes. She drops a black bag in the middle of the hall, no one even notices that it falls. She walks out the back door. No one noticing like before. She walks down the street not looking back, all of a sudden the ground begins to crack. To hear the roar of sirens and the thunder of explosions, it gave her a tingly feeling all over. She no longer has to worry about all the people that make fun, all of her worries are said and DONE...

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