Summer's Last Goodbye

by Twisted Heart   Aug 23, 2006


The distant dream of summer love
Has ended with a sad goodbye
An Autumn glow has now replaced
The light of a celestial sky.

Two young lovers who found each other
Upon the sand traps on the beach
Now hold hands and make a promise
The love they shared, they'd keep.

The moonbeams capture their silhouettes
As they share a final kiss
Together for one moment more
Surrendering to nocturnal's bliss.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Awesome piece. The opening stanza really set the perfect mood. The emotion in this is brilliant. Keep it up!
    Love ya~Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I really enjoyed this poem! you seem to have a great flow to all your writes and i enjoy that as well. it makes reading the poem seem to go by really fast but your words just seemed to feed me. well done! i really like this one.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Tyler

    5/5 awesome poem

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    WOW;; THiS iS REALLY GOOD! iT`S JUST WHAT HAPPENS WiTH SUMMER LOVE! GOOD JOB!

    x3-------SHELBY

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