Not too young

by Thomas   Aug 23, 2006


Not too young to love somebody, because I'm not too young to care,
With a question of my name, in answer I'll be there,
Once your kiss touched my lips, but then you went away,
You took your kiss with you; I feared I'd see that day,
This reminds me of defeat, the first time I lost my heart,
The tear that fell from my eye, hit her lips and broke apart,
Should I let go of her hand, able to accept my defeat?
Until I fall again, the next time we should meet,

Not too young to like someone, because I'd like to try,
As her loves far behind me, yet it's the reason that I cry,
If I call her name twice, on the second shall I wake?
Will she place her hand over, my last breath shall she take?
Every time I see her smile, my heart lets out a glow,
Until she kisses his lips, it destroys me and I know,
But I would let out a smile, in front of all my fears,
She would smile back, and it wipes away my tears,

But its when she wasn't there, to turn my skies to blue,
I realized I was blind, at the thought of missing you,
I couldn't look close up, because of fear Id hide,
In the times that I've wasted, you can see the tears I've cried,
Once I felt your heart beat, so very close to mine,
The first time I saw your smile, you were mine in due time,
You were my God send, at the height of you Id fall,
Right in front of me you stood, left me with no heart at all,

I'd like her to remember, I'd like her to feel the same,
But at times she is so distant, when she cant recall my name,
What we had was real; I'd cherish it all the time,
Wait for you to come home, when everything was fine,
But I waited outside, within the pouring rain,
I knew I could be laughing, but it felt so much like pain,
Not too young to love somebody, because in mind I will be there,
I wish you would take me back, I can show you that I care,

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  • 15 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is so touching... And not too young indeed fits the meaning.
    You love the girl who is impossible to get... How typical. Liked the poem the whole way thorugh. Altough the stanzas were a bit long, it went good with the meaning and the flow.
    Amazing job, keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by IllBeTheOne

    This is like...rele truee...lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Omg! that amazing i love it its so touching and who ever you love is very lucky to have a guy like you.
    you have amazing poems there outstanding
    xoxroxy

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Hampson

    That is good.....you r a great poet....

  • 17 years ago

    by Thomas

    Hey everyone... i'm new here so it would be nice if someone could rate this please ;)