Everybody Crys

by craig   Mar 8, 2004


O`angel
move closer, shut slowly
your tear stained eyes.
Breathe lighter, hold tighter
and soften your cries.

Their hurtful advances, that pangs your defences
will pass as quick as they rise.
Arbitary pretentions and dissolute intentions
just inevitibilitys of life.

O`angel
walk nearer, hold firmer
my proffered hand tight.
Be bolder, I`ll shoulder
your troublesome burdens tonight.

Their cutting offences that quicken your senses
are tribulations we all have to pass.
Their stinging rejections and ulterior deflections
just games that they play through their mask.

O`angel,
be stronger.
Everything changes,
everything passes,
just do what `you` thinks best.
The darkest hour
is right before dawn,
so lay down your woes
and rest.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Craig, I just read this poem for the umpteenth time...and OMG..it's sooo great..then I read your comments again as I came here...and I said hope we'll always be friends..welllll....guess you're always, ALWAYS gonna be my best friend..and my husband..now aren't you? You're the best baby...writing this for me when I was feeling a bit down...you're so perfect, and all mine..I love you with all my heart baby...xxxMich

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    ya know... this is a very cool poem... I love how it flows.... your choice of words is perfection! It's sometimes hard to do that with big words...but you do it so awesomely!

  • 20 years ago

    by paddy

    WOW

    you never stop surpriseing
    have you ever thourt of publishing your work you would certainly make money.
    what can i say that i havent said before,
    i carnt praise you enough on your talents and your master pieces
    they are unique and real i love them
    every day i log in and i click on your name hopeing to see a new poem
    i carnt thank you enough for your comments on my poems they mean so much to me as i respect you as a writter and your opinon is very valueable to me.
    keep doing what your doing
    all my love
    lorna
    xxx ps my e-mail is stardust.girl@ntlworld.com
    it would be great to hear from you craig
    take care
    lorns

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    I am in love with this poem... :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    What can I even begin to say about this?? wow...wowwwwwww. It is sooo beautiful. Angel? wowwww. I know III would be glad to move closer and hold your hand tight...this poem is soo amazing. Why I had to wait to read it I'll never know. DAMN BLOODY OCEAN!!!! You are one terrific bloke, Craiger...and have become a wonderful friend to me..I hope we always will be. This poem is phenomenal..will tell you more in our chats on yahoo...I am so touched by it and truly impressed at your poetic words here..I will try to believe them as I have been in this situation a few times..I always seem to fall into the wrong situations.. :( Thank you sooo much from the bottom of my heart for writing this..I'm stunned..Luv Michelle ;)xxx