Night Sky[[Pantoum]]

by Catastrophic Beauty   Aug 27, 2006


It was my first time trying out a Pantoum

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Staring into the night sky
Laying without a care
Embraced with that guy
Breathing the same air

Laying without a care.
Resting my head on his
Breathing the same air
How cool and calm it is

Resting my head on his
Embraced with that guy
How cool and calm it is
Staring into the night sky

ALL C0MMENTS WiLL BE RETURNED♥
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A pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB. new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. .

The design is simple:

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4

Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8

Continue with as many stanzas as you wish

Last stanza:

Line 2 of previous stanza
Line 3 of first stanza
Line 4 of previous stanza
Line 1 of first stanza

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    Beautifully done. 5/5 i like it a lot keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    WOW;; AMAZiNG! THAT`S SOOOO GOOD! iT`S SO SWEET! GREAT POEM!

    x3------SHELBY

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow this is amazing, wow, you really have talent when it comes to writing, this is so complex lol it's like you've been doing this for centuries hehe, wonderful poem hun,its so sweet and adorable and cute hehe, well done, and thanks for the wonderful comment on my poem, take care,xxoo

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