Comments : Walking...

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, great emotions in this one,
    very well written
    exellent choose of words and nice flow.
    overall an exellent poem

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Awwwwwwwww
    torm actually has a heart
    all this time I thought you was only into me..lol jk jk
    Awesome poem
    some Rhyme in there
    Good detail
    and your word choice
    the style
    it was all good
    great job
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    This is filled with love, at a time where there was only despair. Well done. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    That was great....I love it!!! keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by BlAcK RoSe

    Good poem keep writing:) pls comment on mine thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by BlAcK RoSe

    I enjoy that so much xx keep writing wild rose

  • 17 years ago

    by victoria

    This poem is very cute..and shows exactly what love can do for you.keep writing,i love your work.

    victoria

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was pretty good.. The flow worked well and wasn't bumpy.. But you had lots of grammer mistakes.. Also, if you are rhyming your poem.. You can't just use the same word again.. That is not what rhyming is.. Anyway, your imagery was beautiful.. And the love was clear.. So nice job 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Wow the flow of this part was awsome

    "Storms of life went away
    Sunshine came running my way"

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Spence

    I liked this poem, and you are 12 now. What will your writing be like when your like 17.

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    Great poem... well about this one im speachless to tell you the truth!
    take care
    luv,
    haya 3gab =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Milla

    This poem in amazing! Great job.such a beautiful flow and beat.It has wonderful emotion.Amwesome

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is awesome and thx ofor the comment and it was so weird i was telling someone that u have an awesome peom that they need to read the prince one then u commented my poem well good job on this i really like :D

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You show a lot of emotion here.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kait

    Love it! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    I really liked the imagery in this poem. Your wording was great. Keep it up :P