Enamored!!! (Slightly Edited)

by Robert Gardiner   Aug 28, 2006


[Edit Notes]: The word "infused" was changed to "enthused". I changed the word 'infused' to 'enthused', because it was more the word I was originally looking for, but didn't have proper spelling for at the time. When first creating the line, 'enthused' was really the word I saw there, but I was trying to spell it "intused" and that kept coming up wrong so I found a substitute 'infused'. The differences between the two words as per intended or implicated meaning are 'enthused' means in contexts -- inspired; or greatly excited by or interested in something or something or in a subject or cause (to have extreme fervor for) and 'infused' in contexts means energized, imbued, or inspired; or to fill or cause to be filled with something. Both work for the piece, the line, but enthused is the word I really wanted to use.

Enamored!!!

Love struck, of a girl and she is just wonderful.
Amorous, my affections, I'm captivated, so.
Her Beauty, matched, by no one.
My eyes, I dare say, have now seen perfection.
Her Style, captivating; classy, sophisticated, and refined.
Everything about her, absolutely, divine.
Her Smile, like rays, from heaven above.
Everything about her just radiates, of love.

Infatuated, by this girl, bewildered, bemused,
Intoxicated, by her, utterly, enthused.
Enthralled, my heart, besot, with passion.
Inflamed, is my soul, by this infatuation.

Each moment of mine, awaits, the next chance to see,
This bewitching beauty, that so, entrances me.
And with every glance stolen, I slip, deeper, into her heavenly abyss.
With each and every inhale of her, I'm brought, such happiness.
And, with each breath taken, I float, amongst, the clouds.
By her wondrous rapture, I am, totally, enshroud.

Her Scent, so redolent, as fragrant as can be,
Aromatically pleasing, and all so sweet.
Her voice, like a sweet siren song, serenading, my soul,
Seducing, all my cares away, captivating me , whole
Her Eyes, like diamonds, they sparkle, with life,
Lighting up, my soul, like the stars the night.
Her Lips, luxurious; luscious, soft, and full,
Supple and sensuous, and all so kissable.
To compare to her, there is, no one.
She's like an angel, sent down, from heaven,
Pure aesthetic ecstasy.
Her Face, all parts of it, just comes together, perfectly.
From forehead to nose, from cheek to chin,
Her Face, just radiant, in all of it tints.
Her Person, of such quality, it seems impossible to me,
That one can be, so beautiful and have such a great personality,
And, by her, I'm, utterly, amazed,
By her loving heart, and kind, caring ways,
And if I could hold her, it would be a dream come true to me.
For I live, for the moments, spent basking, in her rhapsody
Fascinated, I am, fervored, to such fancy,
Enamored, of her, engrossed, utterly.
Spellbound, bewitched, every single part of me.
Exhilarated, by her, and left in affinity.

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

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As always, your comments and votes greatly appreciated, thank you!!!

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Poem Notes: This is a poem I wrote that originally dates back to late October 2001. It was written to capture, express, what is was, is, to be enamored, of someone to a very high degree. It was written to explicitly express what it was and is like to be enamored of someone and not written to any someone in particular, but when I first posted it to the net, I used the name of someone I was somewhat (or you could perhaps even say greatly) enamored with (Marel), who was one of my biggest muses at the time. She was someone I worked with and I felt the poem worked better using her name then 'girls name here', in the slot where the person, girl, one was enamored with would go, and plus her name provided a nice inner rhymes as well, so I decided to go with that and told her about whence I saw her next. The name used within the poem has been different over time, has had different incarnations depending upon, whom I best felt deserved to be extolled as such at that particular time, at which I was revising the poem and Christina is the latest name to be implanted, to sit in place of honor.

"Amorous, of a girl, and Damn, is she beautiful.
Christina, her name, and she is, just wonderful."

And although other names have been there, namely Marel and Idalis, she is the light that radiates most brightly in present time.

I also came up with an alternate more generic line and rhyme for the poem that applies to any muse with which a man might be enamored, any girl a man might fancy, and the alternate line reads as such;

"Amorous, of a girl, and Damn, is she beautiful,
Like a Lullaby, her name, and she is, just wonderful."

Well so ends my notes on this poem, and I hope you enjoyed the read.

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  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Very well written. I enjoy my read, kel.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ellie

    The description is truly lovely. Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Such Beauty in every line..
    Captivating.

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhh, that was so sweet Robert! The flow was a little off because of all the differences in the length of your lines.. But the descriptions and love made up for that.. There was a lot of imagery in this piece which made it enjoyable to read! Nicely done! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Heart Locket

    Everything about this poem is utterly amazing! The way you view women, respectfully and how important we are to you. Its just so nice to see that there are still men out there like that.

    I especially loved that part in your piece where you said: "Her Lips, luxurious; luscious, soft, and full,
    Supple and sensuous, and all so kissable."
    The "kissable" just sends sparks on that part of your poem. *haha* Its put together so well! 5/5. Excellent work!

    Dearest,
    Brit

    Also, thank you for commenting on my poetry.