by Robert Gardiner Aug 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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[Edit Notes]: The word "infused" was changed to "enthused". I changed the word 'infused' to 'enthused', because it was more the word I was originally looking for, but didn't have proper spelling for at the time. When first creating the line, 'enthused' was really the word I saw there, but I was trying to spell it "intused" and that kept coming up wrong so I found a substitute 'infused'. The differences between the two words as per intended or implicated meaning are 'enthused' means in contexts -- inspired; or greatly excited by or interested in something or something or in a subject or cause (to have extreme fervor for) and 'infused' in contexts means energized, imbued, or inspired; or to fill or cause to be filled with something. Both work for the piece, the line, but enthused is the word I really wanted to use. |
by kelleyana
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Very well written. I enjoy my read, kel. |
by Ellie
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The description is truly lovely. Nice job. |
by Misstress
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Such Beauty in every line.. |
by Jessica
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Awhh, that was so sweet Robert! The flow was a little off because of all the differences in the length of your lines.. But the descriptions and love made up for that.. There was a lot of imagery in this piece which made it enjoyable to read! Nicely done! 5/5 |
by Heart Locket
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Everything about this poem is utterly amazing! The way you view women, respectfully and how important we are to you. Its just so nice to see that there are still men out there like that. |