Oleander Girl (Lanturne)

by Truest Lies   Aug 28, 2006


............I
..........Am a
.......Poisonous
.....Oleander
..........Girl

**A lanturne is a poem that consists of five lines, with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,1.. with the dots coming together to make the form of a japanese lanturn.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    So simple yet so beautiful, very nicely written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow, that was great! The words you used were good and contained a lot of meaning for just a few of them.. Very nicely done! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow, nice. i've never written like this because..well it's hard, but you pulled it off nicely. 5/5

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