Very impressive words ,such a great talent you have ,your poem got tears to my eyes actullay touched my heartache
when I was reading I just felt you were writing about my story with someone I might not be poet but chemist but your words ,Lord they are more than great
Best wishes
Sara

Wow. this is such a beautiful poem. I've been trying for years to create beautiful phrases with word just asyou did. I love this poem.

Thats awesome! The tense switches a lot, but, whatever! Its awesome.

An utterly amazing insight into the loss of a loved one. bravo.

That was so good,pure talent, it was so pretty and makes me wonder who were you thinking about

Nice poem i enjoyed it

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Good job how old are you

A true Poet straight from the heart

Wow! are all the words that come to this, not so good poet.

This is completely and utterly impressive. keep up the good work!

I hope that I can learn to write such expressive beautiful pieces of work

A fairytale of great love... nice work!

So beautiful.....teardrop!

Absolutly amazing. nothing else can be said.

Theres something about this poem,
that i'm just in love with

It is every touching

This poem puts the best poets to shame.You have a truely amazing gift.I cried the first time i read it the second time i simply couldnt read it all the tears were bloking my view.Only true beauty brings tears.

I really like how you changed the view of this poem around like how it went from me, to he to him. and such. i think this poem is very creative and the word choice is flawless. i love every word of this poem amazing job. theres nothing else to say. i love it.

Wow . this is simply amazing . the words fit in perfectly .

OMG, this one hit so close to home that I teared up like 3 times trying to read it. Even had to light a cigarette because it was like looking into the doorway of my soul and having you read it back to me.