Wow. Jessy that was amazing. The flow was perfect, the words where so powerful. I loved it, it was such a great read. Keep up the work.

Loved it keep it up and ill keep reading :):)

would you read my newest poem please? its called The Sacrifice Of Love thnx xxx alex xxx

Yup that was really good for your first. I really like it. keep it coming. and if you could please read my new poem " just a little walk" and its the only poem i have becouse im new here.thanks and great job.

WOw, that's so cool. it's amazing that the poem goes together so well. i like it. keep writing:)
xoxox

Nice write, I havent finished writing mine yet but im sure it wont be as good as yours!!! You did a terrific job!! 5/5!!! Beautifully Written!!

Very well written and i like the type of poetry you have chosen. you are a poet with a great talent and i like all of your poems, they are great.

Very interesting and well written..
You have a nice touch
keep it up
-singko-

Hey greta poem! i cant believe its your first of this kind! really greatjob, it flows sooooo well.
love mel

Souls ripped of beauty, all hope it does drain
^ That's my favorite line.

I also liek the repitition of the words on the end : Blood
Flowing
*
Flowing
Blood

It adds this great affect. You've inspired me to write a diatelle (sp?) as well! Great job.

Wow, how creative! What a beautiful and interesting way to write poetry. I loved it!

Wow that was relly deep 5/5

Brilliant! I loved the way and style you wrote in. That's interesting..Keep it up!

Wow, this was a great write! I tried to do the Diatelle style before but i just cant!! So im jealous that you can not only write but do it so well!! The words were so powerful and the flow was great!! This poem deserves nothing less then a 5/5!!!Wonderful Job!!

Wow this poem was deepppp! it was well written, and i love the stle you wrote it in, keep it up!

I like ur poem! it is very depressing! 5/5

Jessy, Ive tried writing one of these but it never turns out very good.
I wonder how its done so beautifully as this one, keep writing.
xxxxx

Such a vivid poem! gave me shivers reading it...that's a good thing, too!

Wow, this is very unique, but the subject is something that is portrayed over and over again. Sorry, but I've read too much of these cutting poems. I love the unique style that it's written though, I've never seen or heard of that before. Awsome!

This was excellent. Very well put together. Loved the structure.

Good poem. the flow was good. and the scheme was exelent. good job