The Result of Depression.

by Willow   Aug 31, 2006


She's fed up with life,
And today's the last time she'll be hit.
She'll grab that knife,
Then put it to her wrist and make a slit.

She's too scared to tell anyone
Exactly what goes on at home.
But if she doesn't, it'll mean her parents won,
And her feelings will remain unshown.

No matter what she does or how she does it,
Her parents are never satisfied.
She would be continually hit,
And she continually cried.

She has put up with this pain for too long,
And now she is going to end it all.
She now sings the suicide song,
And has started planning the moment of her fall.

Listen carefully to what she says,
For you will never hear her say it again.
Tell her what she means to you,
And hold her while her tears rain.

Don't try to stop her from doing this,
You'll get hurt even more if you do.
Tell her that she'll be the one you'll miss,
And tell her that her death doesn't have to come true.

The knife is lieing in blood upon the floor,
And the overdose of pills has kicked in.
To her, life was an endless war,
And somehow, she knew she would never win.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SunDown Sky

    This is O_O

    "The knife is lieing in blood upon the floor,
    And the overdose of pills has kicked in
    To her, life was an endless war,
    And somehow, she knew she would never win."

    i luv this ... so sad... this describes so well how some feel about themselves and their parents..

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    That is really good. it really appealed to me cuz i just couldn't quit reading it! great job 5/5

    xoxo kisses

  • 17 years ago

    by Littl3Pickl369

    Very good, deep, and creative

  • 17 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    I really hope your friend Tami is ok and iddn't do n e thing she would regret in life... but this poem speaks to me in a way that i have never really been spoken to... you catch my attention and take me for the full ride throughout the poem. great skill.... wish i could have a lil bit of it... keep up the awesome work

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This was amazing it stared of a bit simple but it evolved into a materpiece i really liked the metaphor And hold her while her tears rain it was so sad and made it more true and i could feel the pain as i read it :):) xxx alex xxx