A Lonely Suicide.

by Willow   Aug 31, 2006


Sing a song of happiness,
A pocket full of blades.
If you watch closely,
You will see the scars that fade.
Cover them up with a smile,
Make them think you're fine.
But remember that fake smile only lasts a while,
And your eyes no longer shine.
Use a blade to kill the pain,
And a tissue to wipe your unworthy blood away.
Catch those tears that continually rain,
I think today is the day.
Make the noose and hang it high,
And take the pills just in case.
Cut your wrists and your thighs,
And don't forget that your life was a waste.
Write your goodbye letter,
And put on the noose.
Don't forget this will make things better,
And make sure that noose isn't loose.
Yell goodbye and take your leap,
Slowly feel your life end.
Didn't you remember how badly your mother would weep,
And didn't you remember her heart will never mend.
You've finally escaped what made you hurt,
But in the process you broke you mothers heart.
She now lies weeping in the dirt,
For she lost the girl she loved and she has fallen apart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by PrInCeSs CaNdY12

    Bootiful poem but sad at the same tym

    X x X

  • 17 years ago

    by Littl3Pickl369

    I relly liked this one, in my top 5 of yours, keep it commin

  • 17 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    Wow this poem is just amazing... i have no toher words for it... i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    This is such a touching poem! wow.. i thought it was going to be like all the others, ending with a useless death, but the end was so original, i love it. 5/5
    keep writing, u have so much potential,
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by I - O - W - A

    What Can I Say Apart From Everything The Past 3 Comments Have lol Truely An Amazing Poem, What Amazes Me About This Poem Is That Its Filled With Such Convincing Emotion That It Would Be As Though You'd Actually Committed Suicide, Either That Or Its A Thought An You Could Bare to Do That To Your Mother, Or Its Happend To Some One Close To You, Amazing, Its Such A Hard Topic To Write About, Im Trully Amazed By It