The Battlefield

by Jax   Aug 31, 2006


A battle of wills
And deadly skills
A battle of hate
That sadly...chooses your fate.

A battle of cries
And fatal lies
A battle of faces
In lonely places

A battle of judgement
Set by the government
A battle of tears
Forgotten by years

A battle of strength
Deciding out rankth
A battle of wrongs
Only sang in sad songs

A battle of rules
Enemies are tools
A battle of fear
A real chance to look in the mirror

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Wow, real deep. got a powerful meaning. i like the ending. i like how u twist at the end. good job:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. strong poem, well written.. great rhyming scheme.. such a strong subject to.. my grandad was in the war! great write 5/5..
    Best Wishes..
    Please can you rate and comment on my poems, Thanks..
    Kirsty Palmer xXx

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