One last time

by Lutu   Sep 1, 2006


Blinded by tears
I feel you walking away.
Everything is black
Even sun shining above me
Fades as dropping from the sky
Is this the end?
Or this is where all begins again?
I feel the silence softly killing me.
One last breath to take,
One last tear to fall.
As i lay to sleep
Never waking up to feel,
One last time i'll try to smile.

Before ending the last sentence i heard about friends death... This is to him. R.I.P Kaur 30.08.06

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Lot's of emotion. This is well written. Great read! 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    This was so sad and yet so beautiful. I could feel everything that you were feeling and I am sorry for your loss. I know what it feels like to lose a friend forever. It really hurts and I can tell you are hurting in this poem.

    Astryd

  • 17 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    Great poem by the way, may your friend rest in peace, and even though I don't know him, I will support his decisions in life in committing suicide.

    Tony :D love ya

    Thxs for commenting on my poems

  • 17 years ago

    by SadKuteAngel

    Aww how sad.. nice tho :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie Rose

    Wow.. i like this one. its rly good. o and thx for my comment. yeah that feeling...SUX!!! but just wanted to let u no that this is my fave poem.

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