Crying in the rain

by Shelby   Sep 2, 2006


Crying.In.The.Rain.
Cause.No.One.Cared.
To.See.What.Was.Truly.Happening.
To.Me.

They.May.Look.But.They.Don't.See.
They.Try.And.Help.
But.They.Don't.Really.Care.
If.Only.You.Could.See.
What's.Truly.Happened.To.Me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a great piece, but the use of periods and capital letters really didtracts from the meaning-it's almost like a gimmick, which the piece is strong enough to not need..The title really explains so much.

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    That was amazing...i love it
    auna

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