You and Me

by TrueLovesVictim   Sep 2, 2006


I miss the way it used to be
When there was only you and me
I miss the way you held me tight
Just so i knew that this was right

I miss the way you looked into my eyes
And told me that they reminded you of skies
I miss the way you reminded me
Of how much fun that i could be

Its sad that i was the one who said
its over and went crying to bed
I tried to tell you simple things
but all you heard were all these rings

I'm sorry that i ended it
I only hope that i will get
Something good out of this
or am i stuck in all this bliss

Please let us go back to be
the couple known as you and me
Ill hold you tight
and you'll tell me that this is right

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  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    Nice iwrite poems like this you should read some of my featured poems

  • 17 years ago

    by LOnightOJmareVE

    I miss my "YOU and ME" use-to-be life too... not literally you...lol but yeah... you get me right? great poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by LOnightOJmareVE

    Great poem there... Great basis... I don't really wanna say stupid words... for an apparently sad poem.... but i appreciate this poem... Keep writing..

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Nice right, i think you should make it longer, but it is still good

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Some of the lines were a little forced in rhyme, as though you put in the first words that rhymed...like

    Its sad that i was the one who said
    its over and went crying to bed
    I tried to tell you simple things
    but all you heard were all these rings

    I didn't quite understand "all these rings" at first, but then I got that it was like rings in your ears---so, yeah, I liked that. The beginning I liked though, because one day I want to have someone who can be like that with me.

    //T.L.//

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