Not a great poem

by Michael   Sep 3, 2006


When I'm with you I don't notice how soaked I really am
How cold I am
All I really notice is you
Your smile, your touch, your scent, and your voice
Even the silence doesn't bother me
Something that would normally drive me insane, doesn't phase me when I'm with you
You're the greatest thing in my life
I don' know if I'd be able to go on without you

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  • 17 years ago

    by kristina

    That was a nice poem hey check out my new poem kiss me and break the spell thats wat its called

  • 17 years ago

    by samantha

    Gosh i didnt know i was that great lol but its a sweet poem and i dont notice anything else but u really either.

  • 17 years ago

    by samantha

    Gosh i didnt know i was that great lol but its a sweet poem and i dont notice anything else but u really either.

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Good. keep up the work!

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