Wow such a dark poem, and loved the ending.. great write.. ryhming was good too.. helped with the flow... 5/5..
Best Wishes..
Please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..
Kirsty Palmer xxx

Oh! that was so sad...is it wrong to say I loved it? ;)

Wow! amazing write...I really loved it...really dark but still amazing. Great job!
~Jules

Great poem.
full of emotion.
thanks for the comment.
:]

I love this poem its very touching

You really have a way with words. I love it.

You really have a way with words. I love it.

Awwww i really liked this one! Nicely written. All your writing is really good .
Keep Smiling,
Love Zena

You have the best poems ever and im serious it's not all talk. Your poems touch me

This was really good. i feel like that alot...
thnxx for the comment i love all your poems

Lovely :)

Never say never kiddo :) ive been there everyone get a seccond chance :)

Wow

This almost made me cry...excellent job again.

This made fear come all over my body.....but in a VERY good way!!! 5/5!!!

You hit your dark mark with the skill of a master