HAIKU - Love of the Races

by LockedInEternity   Sep 5, 2006


Black boy and White girl,

People may stare, they don't care.

They love each other.

**Just to let you know that this was my first haiku, so dont be too harsh I'm still getting there..lol..no actually be as harsh as you want as long as you tell me whats wrong with it, this really isn't my style of writing:P
Haiku's are really hard..lol:P No surprise though, eh?

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  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    I liked how u made the first two lines rhyme. good message. good haiku. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    AWW;; i`M iN LOVE WiTH A BLACK GUY! i LOVE HiM TO DEATH BUT MY MOM SAiD PEOPLE MiGHT THiNK DiFFERENT OF ME;; BUT i REALLY DON`T CARE! GREAT POEM!

    *GiRL iN LOVE

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