Depression

by Lisa   Mar 9, 2004


Sometimes I fall
Into a depression so deep
No one can pull me out
It's like I'm asleep

I can feel a pain
Deep inside my chest
I slowly close my eyes
And I take a breath

I feel a tear fall down my face
I'm trying hard just to erase
The memories of good and bad
The memories that make me sad.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I really felt that. i sometimes feel like that also. very good poem.. well written!!! keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    great poem i know what ur talkin about well written short but consivive, ( i think that's how it is spelled) lol, but new ways great job

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Bloodied&Broken

    WOW! some awsome feeling in that, try to work on the sylables and stuff so it rhymes betta- just a suggestion :)

    -luv KT

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    Short, well written, and to the point. I thought this poem was well written because a lot of poems talk about how they are angry, mad, p*ssed, etc. But yours just said sad, and that pretty much summed it all up. Anyway, nice job. Kudos

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