Daddy Come Home

by ying2yang4fire   Sep 6, 2006


In every little girls life
theres a time when we need our daddy.

Daddy your my favorite
Daddy your the best
Daddy I love you so
thats why ur so cool.

If you were to die
my world would come to an end
for I can't live without you because
my life revolves around you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    I like this poem a lot! There's just one thing I would comment on.
    for I can't live without you because
    This line is a little too long since the rest of the lines are shorter. Maybe if you change 'because' to 'cause' or just re-write the line. Nice write otherwise, I loved it!