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Short and to the point, i like it.
short poems are my kinda poems, i dont like stuff that rambles on forever. (:

It's very good...it gives the reader the wish of wanting to know more...though i think you could add another stanza...i mean, you give the reader the wish to want to know more and, then, there is no more...do you know what i mean?
still wonderful, though...

*isabel*

It's so short, i think that you could expand on most of your poems. Or if you like just sticking with short poems, you should try some different styles of poems. Alot of them are quite short. You are good at putting strong points across in short poems, so i think that you would do exceptionally well with short styled poems. Just a thought. Nicec work though. =]

I think that you should put a little more thought into.. ppl like to read!!
loved it tho..
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Hehe... its definitely short! haha but so direct... straight to the point.. not beating around the bush... :D keep writing!

~angel~