Only mistake

by desigirl   Sep 22, 2006

Like any one else
my heart is full of pain
like any other sky
my world is full of rain

like any other girl
I fall in love too
the only mistake was
I fall in love with you


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  • 8 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    I like it it has great purpose and has great meaning great work

  • 13 years ago

    by isabel

    The poem is short, easy to read and very beautiful...though is is true that it would make more sense if it were "my only mistake was, i fell in love with you" or maybe "to fall in love with you"...
    anyway, it's really good...


  • 13 years ago

    by AsIaNBeE

    Hey gr8 poem simple an says soo much. i'm 2 struk wid all dat.

  • 13 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo. Great message, it really is. I've felt the same way, and I know where you're coming from. I just didn't see why you put [like any other sky
    my world is full of rain]. All skies don't rain all the time. I just thought that was a little odd. =P Keep it up. 5/5 xoxo


  • 13 years ago

    by Mark

    The poem was really good.. but at the end it says 'I fall in love with you' .. it should be 'fell' 5/5!