Unusual
Good Imaginery together with delicate word choice..
Good work!

God Bless

A haunting rhythm of dark silence. well written

Wow!! you really do have a gift for writing poetry! After reading quite a few of them! I've decieded that you are very good at writing poetry!

I've decided that, too be fair, I did say I would comment on your four newest, so I'm going to.

The word choice on this one is especially nice, the words aren't overused and they work well together. The flow of the last line of the first stanza is kind of off compared to the rest of the poem, but other than that it's really good. I really like how you reused the rhyming words at the ends of the lines, very unique.

Now this is something.. I'm glad you are using your gift which is called " imagination" I loved how you wrote and ended. I really enjoyed it. 5/5 for sure.

Great use of words and images. Did you purposely use the same rhyme words?

Omg, I got goosebumps when I read this. That is good though. I like poems that make me litturally feel for it. Loving your Dark poetry Hun, Great write.

Wonderful job here as well, 5/5
you are a great writer

I love this poem. you are an amazing writer. xoxo leah.

Awesome! Love the rhyming and wording!
5/5

I love it, this poem was amazing ur an excellent writter

Haunting, beautiful, dark. I love it! 5/5

I couldnt help but read another of your poems im adding u to my favs 5/5

Another geart poem 5/5

Out to the fields of the silent and the dead,
You'll find remorse dancing through your head.
A scream so loud it seeps within bone,
Screeching, telling you it is all alone.

^^AMAZING. OHMY. I loved this one! It had such good flow and depth. Truly.. amazing. gave me the gitters. =l. Like Halloween! Lol.

Wow!!!! That is awsome!! It reminds me of halloween I love it!!

It's a really good poem, but you rhymed the same words a lot, like head and dead, also tread and dread. Try using different words to get the point of the poem across! You're a really good writer, keep it up!

A really dark and haunting poem. but thats probably why i loved it.