Just listen

by Nil   Sep 10, 2006


Sit down and listen
Just for once
I want to tell you
What I've done

It's ripping me apart
From the inside out
I have to express this
All of my self doubt

Please i beg you
Just listen to me
This burden i carry
Is distorting what i see

My vision is Grey
I can't see the light
My eyes have fallen
Into eternal night

My voice is screaming
Somehow without sound
The only thing i can hear
Is my heart pound

My hands are sweating
It drips down my face
Having all these urges
To runaway from this place

So please listen to me
I need someone to hear
Even if you don't care...
Just stay with me here..

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  • 16 years ago

    by ILoveRobbie

    THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by dyingxpassion

    Wow!
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  • 17 years ago

    by waking up inside

    -beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    Your poem is excellent.
    Very beautiful, you have a great talent with writting.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayd

    Well done, I couldn't stop untill I finished it, then I re-read it a couple times!