Loose Heart

by BeautifulxMess   Sep 12, 2006


My life seemed like a
crash of debris. When
I fell, there's no one
there for me.

Time's I felt there's
just no use. I would
fall and my heart
kept getting loose.

No one saw the hurt
in my eyes. But saw
you, and you took
me by surprise.

All that pain and
tension eased away.
And all there was
left was a heart
that will always stay.

Many times the same
old disturbing road
would appear. In my
eyes all it does is try
to keep that fear.

You're there to rescue
me; saw all my pain.
God forbid if you
ever leave, I'd go
insane.

My heart can't take
all that stress. If I
want to smile I lean
my head upon your
chest.

You indulge will all
your love. Hold my
hand, touch my skin,
oh how I can never
get enough.

I will bestow my heart,
just keep it tight. Don't
let it loosen up just hold
it will all your might.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I appreciate your comment. It was very nice. Just returning the favor. I thought it was good. My only suggestion is to be cautious with your rhyme scheme. Other than that...good job! Jpoet*