Lonely
by argueing with the rain Sep 14, 2006
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Have you ever felt so lonely. standing in the crowd. have you ever hurt so much. blinded by the pain. looking for some relief. dragging the blade against your virgin skin. shedding so many tears, but keeping them all to yourself. fearing what people will think, you seal it in a vault locking it away. misunderstood, all those looks your given. branded on your soul. I'm not so different. just looking for some love. a brief sign of concern. |
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17 years ago
This one is nice too.
Tip: Maybe if you had them in short sentences or something.
Apart from that I liked it.
Good.
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17 years ago
by Tenisha
Great work i feklt ur emotions good job 5/5
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17 years ago
by Christie
Omgosh, this is beautifully written and worded, i love it.i can completely relate to this. 5/5 and three thumbs up, this was clearly written from the heart.
keep writing, u have such potential and talent. =)
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17 years ago
Yeah.. All the time.
Great poem. it ws full of rawr emotion and the way it was written was simple yet advanced, it could use some breaks to differenciate the lines and whatnot but otherwise it made ma angry and idk, it had emotion. although more of a rant it was good.
5|5
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17 years ago
by Brisa
Nice work. i liked it. keep it up
