Blood, sweat and tears

by Amanda   Sep 15, 2006


Bleeding from my heart,
shooting out the pain,
Knowing you don't want me,
I'll never see you again,

Sweating from my fears,
all my hopes and dreams,
Knowing this is my life,
all loneliness - it seems,

Knowing it won't change,
and I'll be like this forever,
Hoping you still love me,
but that won't happen - ever,

Tears from my soul inside,
tearing me into shreds,
Watching people hating me,
they quickly turn their heads,

So if they don't understand,
What I'm going through,
All this hurt deep inside,
I know what I will do,

I'll just live on as I am,
not letting my pain show,
Pretend that I am happy,
Then no-one will have to know.

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Heyy greatttt poem. your name sounds oddly familiar... hmm well great job :D

  • 17 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    "I'll just live on as I am,
    not letting my pain show,
    Pretend that I am happy,
    Then no-one will have to know."

    i know how you feel.........i loved this 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Hi Amanda, It's been a while...this poem reaches deep and believe me one day that love you will find...hope you're doing well....beautifully penned with such sadness....love ya girly...

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. Very deep and meaningful. Excellent rhyming and it flowed very nicely.

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    This was really good. and uhm your name sounds vagly familiar but i dont know who you are at least i dont think i do but anyway

    good job!

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