Great, very well written and you have showed your great talent of poetry. great job. 5/5

Awh, that was very pretty.. I like the title too! I thought it was a little choppy though, like you ended each line in an awkward spot.. Other than that, beautiful imagery! Nicely done! 5/5

Loved it!! Itwas mint!

Lovely haiku, kudos!!!

Wow a great haiku i never tried this one before great job
btw thanks for the comments

Geneross

Not bad at all. I generally hate haikus, but I didnt mind reading yours a bit.

A beautifully written haiku.. well done 5/5 xx

Interesting stuff .. I'm a little slow to understand it's true meaning.. but after figuring it out it's very.. hmm.. relxaing?

Diffrent from the ones I normaly read but I liked it, beginning to like small and short poems.

Thanks for your c/r
-Josiah

I love Haiku poetry. I think it is so interesting. This one is very well written. Nice work.

Wow..awsome short poem!!!!!!

This is the first poem that I have ever
read like this. But I think I get the
meaning of it. I liked the style of it, but it was a little to short for me. But
I still think that your an excellent poet
so I give you a 5/5 on that strength
alone. Keep up the good work.

Love
Letty

You have a way with words...which is unbelievable!